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Raine Sillito's avatar

That last line, 'your shadow etched into the sidewalk' is just....perfection.

Mia Laetitia's avatar

Thank you Raine! It's such an old poem of mine that I held back on sharing because I didn't feel it was strong enough - but that line is one of my favourites, so I'm pleased to hear someone else likes it too :)

Lillian Kennedy's avatar

this is beautifully written <3